For fans of Gary Schmidt's writing, What Came from the Stars seems like a bit of a departure from form. For one thing, it's science fiction.
On
 a faraway planet, the last brave heroes of a doomed race are besieged. 
While the Valorim warriors hold the door against the O'Mondim invaders, 
Young Waeglim forges the Art of the Valorim into a chain and, with the 
last of his strength, sends it out among the stars, far away from the 
scene of the battle, to a little blue planet in a distant galaxy. The 
chain falls from the stars into the atmosphere, and from there into the 
Ace Robotroid lunchbox of twelve-year-old Tommy Pepper. When Tommy 
Pepper picks the chain up and puts it on, he develops certain unexpected
 artistic skills. Also, it transforms the supremely embarrassing Ace 
Robotroid lunchbox into something cool and spacey-looking. Tommy has 
worse problems than an embarrassing lunchbox, though: his mother has 
recently died, his younger sister is not talking to anyone any more, and
 his father is locked in a battle with developers who want the seaside 
land where the Pepper family's house sits. Their troubles increase when 
strange, unseasonable storms start ravaging the area, and houses in the 
town are vandalized in strange and disturbing ways. Tommy alone seems to
 realize that the storms and vandalism are because of the O'Mondim, who 
have come to Earth to reclaim the Art of the Valorim. Can Tommy stand 
firm against the invaders and do what is best for both his planet, and 
the other planet so far away whose fate is now inextricably linked with 
his own?
The main problem with this book is the first six pages. 
Schmidt opens the story with a detailed description of that last 
desperate siege. In a visual medium, it would be gripping. 
Unfortunately, in text, it is pretty much incomprehensible. 
Appropriately, Schmidt has created an entirely new language for the 
alien race -- but when you are reading a block of text that is rendered 
in an epic style, with every third or fourth word a made-up one, it is 
pretty tough going. Once the story shifts to Earth, it's a lot more 
engaging. I'm just concerned that the average kid, upon picking up this 
book and looking at that impenetrable block of text, will put the book 
down and move on to something more accessible. I know I nearly did!
Once
 you get past that first chapter, the going gets easier. Tommy and his 
father are engaging characters, and though Tommy's school friends are 
sometimes difficult to distinguish from one another, his teacher is 
brilliant and fun. Making Tommy's sister silent due to grief is an 
interesting decision, but one that I know I've seen in other books, 
which lessens the impact. The story moves along, trying to tie in the 
Cardiff Giant hoax with the alien races, which didn't quite work for me.
 So, while I liked the book, I wouldn't say that it's one of Schmidt's 
stronger works.
(Reviewed from a copy borrowed through my library system.) 

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